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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #care
Environmental issues have always been a debatable topic
amongst
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people
. Taking measurable steps in protecting the environment has always been a personal call. I hereby will discuss
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why
do
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most
people
 are ignorant towards
this
 issue. I do agree most
people
 do not care enough about
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environmental issues since it does not affect them directly causing any type of major inconvenience to their lives.
People
 have grown immune to the increasing environmental hazards turning to their comfortable lifestyle. Modern society finds new ways
everyday
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 to deal with the degrading environment
hence
people
 do not directly see the harmful effects of their actions. Modernization is
also
 one of the major
cause
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 depleting nature. Youth these days
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 busy working and earning money to achieve
the
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 comfortable life. In
this
process
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 they detach themselves from
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nature. More and
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ore
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 young
people
 dream to move to larger cities for better opportunities.
As a
result
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 the urban cities expand their lands by turning the small villages and towns
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 urban cities.
This
 process is called suburbanization.
Therefore
 it could be safe to say suburbanization is
also
 one of the major causes
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 the degrading environmental health. To summarize, I firmly believe it is not surprising that
people
 fail to focus on the existing
ecological
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 issues and act
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appropriately
appropriatly
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appropriately
 to stop them
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form
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 worsening. After all, most
people
also
 have detached themselves
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form
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the
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nature. As
this
 continues, future generations will surely and eventually face a crisis which can alter the way they live.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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