You have got a letter from your pen friend who is going to take an exam soon. She/He feels very nervous about the approaching exam and needs your advice to co.e over the stress. Write a letter to your friend - to wish him/her good luck - to give some tis about how to calm down before and durng the exam - to invite him/her to your country

#pen #friend #exam #advice #co #e #stress #luck #tis #durng #country

Dear Madam or Sir, I am Farangiz. I am

group

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the group

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captain of

History

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the History

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faculty. I am going to write to ask you to help us find the

book

we need.

Furthermore

, we have been trying to find a

book

for a while and the

book

is out of stock.

Consequently

this

book

is necessary for us.

That is

why

that

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apply

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we need to get ready for the 22 th of December exam.

However

, We have two big problems. The problems are that

firstly

, there are four days left on the day of the exam.

Secondly

, we still do not have the

book

Thus

, we inquire a publisher

that

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she

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apply

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republish the

book

or support us with imitates of the

book

Therefore

, we hope that you make an effort to assist us faster. We will look forward to your reply.

Thanks

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Thank

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you for your attention Yours faithfully Team of History faculty.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

150 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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