Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion,what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7

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consideration and
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process
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.Most people encourage their
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school
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they are 5 or 6 years old.I do not agree
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idea because
infants
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mind
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are not match
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to involve more information about science and academic
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comprehension
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comprehension
. On the one hand, when parents compel
children
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school
at
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age
the
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may lose
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their
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their
childhood.
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children
until six or seven
age
should spend more time with their family members at friends at kindergarten.
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school
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age
,
regularly
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and regularly
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being busy with
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educational
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homework
children
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some
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across some problems
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tired of doing the same job and a large number of parents worry about
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indifference to
school
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On the other hand
, parents
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responsible for
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life and their education.So they motivate
infants
to widen their overview
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the world.They should identify
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ability and talent which are
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to music,sport or
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a specific
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subject.
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, they must direct
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children
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capacity.If the
children
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academic
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the academic
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ability,
this
will manifest itself as the child develops and does not need to be forced at an early
age
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For example
, Alisher Navoiy
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was
great
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poet.When he was 4 years old, he learned by heart Mantik ut-tayr book.
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Mozart was an infant prodigy and he learned to compose music at an early
age
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children
are
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and we should give a chance them to live
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during their childhood.Because acquiring academic skills with
infants
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successful
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succesful
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successful
and beneficial way to produce a balanced personality.
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