Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion,what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7
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important
consideration and Add an article
an important
difficult
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a difficult
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process
proccess
.Most people encourage their Correct your spelling
process
children
to begin
studying at school
while
they are 5 or 6 years old.I do not agree Correct word choice
when
this
idea because Change preposition
with this
infants
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infants'
infant's
mind
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minds
are not match
to involve more information about science and academic Change the verb form
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comprehension
omprehension
.
On the one hand, when parents compel Correct your spelling
comprehension
children
to study at school
at early
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an early
age
the
may loseCorrect your spelling
they
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their
thier
childhood.Correct your spelling
their
Moreover
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,Moreover
children
until six or seven age
should spend more time with their family members at friends at kindergarten.Hence
, their attending school
at early
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an early
age
, regularly
being busy with Correct word choice
and regularly
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educational
educaional
homework Correct your spelling
educational
children
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come
some
across some problems Correct your spelling
come
such
as mental or moral stress or get
tired of doing the same job and a large number of parents worry about Wrong verb form
getting
infants
indifference to Change noun form
infants'
infant's
school
.
On the other hand
, parents always
responsible for Add a missing verb
are always
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children's
children
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their childrens
childrens
life and their education.So they motivate Change to a genitive case
children's
infants
to widen their overview about
the world.They should identify Change preposition
of
infant's
ability and talent which are Correct article usage
the infant's
relate
to music,sport or Change the form of the verb
related
specific
subject.Correct article usage
a specific
Also
, they must direct Correct your spelling
children
children's
childrens
capacity.If the Change to a genitive case
children's
children
has
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have
academic
ability,Add an article
the academic
this
will manifest itself as the child develops and does not need to be forced at an early age
.For example
, Alisher Navoiy who
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
great
poet.When he was 4 years old, he learned by heart Mantik ut-tayr book.Add an article
a great
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Mozart was an infant prodigy and he learned to compose music at an early Add a comma
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age
.
In conclusion, I think children
are pure hearted
and we should give a chance them to live Add a hyphen
pure-hearted
free
during their childhood.Because acquiring academic skills with Replace the word
freely
infants
is not Correct your spelling
successful
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a succesful
succesful
and beneficial way to produce a balanced personality.Correct your spelling
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