In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The
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of
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living on the
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grows every day
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of rapidly developing technologies that bring comfort to our lives.
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process is impossible to control which is why I think humanity should come up with a new and better solution to the problems that an increasing population can bring. New machines that come into our lives may cause significant damage to the environment by polluting nature.
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scientists try to worry about ecology, large technologies still use non-ecological sources of power that can lead to the destruction of the
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we exist on.
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,
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still use
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machines as cars, planes or ships that use oil as a source of energy
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traffic fumes destroy our nature.
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damage can eventually kill our
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which is why we might need to start seeking a new
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. A growing
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of
people
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living on the Earth is growing every year. By now there are eight billion
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and
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will rapidly change as the quality of living is rising all around the world because of the new inventions that make our lives longer. Our
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is huge but the amounts of food we require will grow as well as other needs that take sources from our
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with increasing population.
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, there is a large
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of animals we grow and kill every day just to keep
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alive which will only grow.
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why
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need more space than they can find on other planets. To conclude, if countries won’t stop polluting our homes and won’t come up with a solution to the rapidly growing
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of
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, we can face the death of our
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.
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it is our true
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and we should take care of it, humanity should have a
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solution which finding a new
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on another
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can be.
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why I personally think that governments should sponsor space programs and seek a new
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in our galaxy that can come in handy someday.
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