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Some people believe that success means earning a lot of money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

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In
this
 ,world many
people
 desire to become successful. Surprisingly, success has a lot of different meanings to society. While there are
people
 whose biggest goal is to become wealthy, there are others who feel that personal happiness is more important and I agree with
this
 point of view. One reason why I admit
this
 statement is the suitable environment. If
people
 are being able to surrounded by their loved ones, they will feel comfortable about their current situation.
Moreover
, it relates directly to safe and healthy surroundings. Because
this
 completely affects our health and lifestyle. On top of that job satisfaction influences our status in the workplace. When we are pleased with what we do, it changes events that will happen in the near future. In the study, experts said that
people
 who love their work, usually do not miss the opportunities which improve skills and knowledge. Not only focus on yourself but
also
 advances your attitude toward colleagues and increase self-development.
However
, personal happiness is important, money is an essential necessity for living. Purchasing very expensive items may be a kind of success, but it's just a veil invisible to others. From
this
 point of my view, money can buy anything, but it cannot buy happiness.
Last
 but not least, I think being successful will depend on personal enjoyment more than being able to afford anything you want. Would you be happy if you don`t have a person whom you rely on and do a job you don`t like?
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