Cities are becoming more and more congested and polluted as the number of private cars increases. What are the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car?

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. Getting
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and having crate makes road and cities more
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public transportation .
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because they can go anywhere anytime
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time period with full enjoyment .
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.
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range of 1.5 lakh by TATA MOTORS which is quite
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we seldom give a thought to
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. Foremostly ,
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needs either petrol or diesel to run its motor and it
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of the
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may occur and not walking for
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their health .
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in Europe . The Seemingly inexorable description about purchasing
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can keep on going .
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which can be good for the world
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • convenience
  • schedule flexibility
  • privacy
  • commute
  • environmental pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • maintenance costs
  • fuel costs
  • stress
  • crowded areas
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