Some people believe more action can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The
crime
rate is still high in some countries and threatens normal life. Use synonyms
Although
It is argued whether it is unstoppable to preclude crimes because nearly nothing can solve the problem or whether we should do more and hope for people is remained, I am of the opinion that a significant change can be done.
We can not change people’s behaviour and mindset. Linking Words
In other words
, a considerable amount of crimes happen indoors by husbands or family members because of the raw between a married couple and the aggression. Linking Words
For instance
, in countries like Uzbekistan or Kazakhstan despite the fact that a strict law exists, it does not stop men from killing and abusing their families and nothing could stop them since they are not frightened by going to prison. Linking Words
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crime
rate does not drop and crimes are still happening as they used to be.
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However
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death
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penalty
can be a good solution, in my view. What I mean is, if we allow all the countries to use the Use synonyms
death
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penalty
for those who murder people others probably would think twice before committing the Use synonyms
crime
. In Kazakhstan, as an example, the Use synonyms
crime
rate is higher than in China because Kazakhstan's government forbids Use synonyms
this
method of punishment while in China is it commonly used. Linking Words
This
shows that the Linking Words
death
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penalty
works and prevents a great number of homicides.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
some people are devastated and scared of their conditions, there is still a chance to stop both domestic violence and murder by implementing of Linking Words
death
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penalty
regularly.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite