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Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#say #thatr #people #attention
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Advertisements
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 have become
main
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 tool to announce
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products.
People
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 have different views about whether advertising forces the customer to get a certain
product
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 or
it
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whether it
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 has been an old tool that can attract our attention. On the one hand, advertising can force
people
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 unconsciously to buy items
through
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in
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 two ways commonly used by manufacturers.
Firstly
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, repetition, which means presenting a
product
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 many times to consumers can make them decide that the
product
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 is essential and purchase it.
For example
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, banners of a
product
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 along roads and video
advertisements
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 on YouTube
that
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stream every time you open a video.
Secondly
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, using
people
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 who claim that they got the
product
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 and was beneficial to them
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makes us convinced
with
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 the
product
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.
On the other hand
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, with the advances
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 technology,
people
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 have become able to recognize what is essential for them. They already know that advertisers use their way to make a
product
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 in its best shape and
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. Not only that,
people
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 themselves may have a previous unsuccessful experience in purchasing items through
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.
Consequently
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, to get a
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,
people
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 will not easily be convinced
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by
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 a simple advertisement. I would partially agree
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 the idea that advertisers can play games on our brains to make us buy a
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, but I believe that we have the choice to get it or not. In conclusion, it is beyond the scope of imagination that one would decide that
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is
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 the best way for selling objects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • capture attention
  • emotional engagement
  • targeting techniques
  • tailor ads
  • preferences
  • celebrity endorsements
  • influencer marketing
  • psychological tactics
  • scarcity
  • urgency
  • ad fatigue
  • effectiveness
  • coping mechanisms
  • ad blockers
  • saturated markets
  • innovative strategies
  • traditional methods
  • digital media
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