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In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there is a great discussion about whether some countries have
children
 when they get older. Many
people
 believe there is nothing wrong with
this
 action, but there is a significant portion of the population who think
otherwise
.
This
 essay will argue why I believe the advantages
about
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of
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people
 having
children
 at later age outweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, there are many advantages to having
children
 at a later age.
To begin
 with, the most important family is ready to care for the
children
. Some parents think kids should be born when everything is enough for them
such
 as money, education and love. Another, the
further
 have a child when the elder
have
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 wealth
such
 as
house
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a house
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 and cars.
This
 is because the family prepared everything for the
children
. In fact, to make them happy and enjoy being with their parents.
On the other hand
, some
people
 can argue that there are various negative effects
for
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on
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 kids, probably
of
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on
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 health.
Which
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This
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 is,
old
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because old
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 parents have a child's
effect
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affect
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 damages of life
for
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,for
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 example, they
possible
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possibly
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 occur a disease or obtain a fever
easily
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more easily
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 than other
people
.
However
, another argument is
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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about
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 social life. How to
children
 able to be normal
in
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apply
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everyday
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every day
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due to
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apply
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sometimes environment it was different for them, because
of
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human
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humans
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 have
the others point
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the other's point
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 of view,
society
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society's
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 community important for a child in the future to
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have
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be have
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behave
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a friends
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friends
a friend
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,
co-worker
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co-workers
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 and
couple
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couples
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. In conclusion, as I illustrated with my arguments above, I believe that everything does not have a limited scope to make it possible to make as needed.
This
 is not to compare advantages or disadvantages but to decide by yourself.
Submitted by daroromylove on

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