Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain people. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Nowadays,
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drastically. In the past, there is no
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option for
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getting
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getting
attention towards
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or any other entertaining things. But now we have so many options
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available for
such
things. Like,
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media
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applications
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, OTT
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platforms
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and so on. Even news channel has
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their own application where we can explore
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content
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content
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Firstly
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televisions are the best option for getting information. As there are many news channels
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available on it.
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any time we want. As well as, we
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entertainment
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for us.
Hence
, we can tell that
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performing both roles effectively.
On the other hand
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television.
Such
as, we cannot see
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any location.
For example
, if we are travelling
then
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Furthermore
, children do not want to watch television
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informative
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purposes
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, they always watch movies, cartoons and so on.
As a result
, they could not focus on study.
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experience
experiance
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experience
, my friend's child watched so
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may
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many
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cartoons
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television
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as a result
he did not
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enough
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enough
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in
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the exam
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.
Besides
of
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, my child
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is watching
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TV
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a
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information
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only so he got well in
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exam
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exams
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.
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my point of view, televisions are performing
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best in both
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. But it
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on us
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how can we use it.
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