Although family is a powerful influence on child's life, it is also influenced from outside the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon of

children

being affected by external factors has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on the issue in question may be, I totally agree with the idea that young people are easier get influenced outside environment. Of all the reasons why

children

are influenced from outside, probably the most significant one is that

children

spend one-

third

of their time studying and playing with other pupils at school every day. They hang out with peers most of the time

besides

their parents. So, they are easily affected by other students since they are at a susceptible age.

For instance

, some students say the new mobile phone is fantastic,

then

other students will believe it without actually trying the new phone. They tend to believe what their peers said without suspecting in turn gaining their peer's recognition. Another reason that should not be overlooked is that we are living in a world with too much advertising. They will show on your TV, mobile phone, public transportation, etc... Advertisements can easily input a thought into

children

's minds.

For example

, many advertisements aimed at young people, keep conveying some advantages of their product into the reader's mind.

As a result

, those

children

who read the advertising may get influenced, and persuade their parents to buy those products. Under

this

link of thinking, it seems to me that the affection of outside factors is much more serious than their parents.