Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect and endangers spices discuss the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Nowadays, in several nations, industries and businesses are moving to the countryside rather than big cities encouraged by the authorities.
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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the government's regulation and provide a logical conclusion
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one is better. The two main advantages are a boost in the local economy and more varied job opportunities.
Firstly
, metropolitan societies that have consumerism
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tend to spend money on
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range of local services, including houses, transportation, and food daily. While
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native villagers tend to save money as they have a simple life rather than city dwellers.
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population adjustment leads to
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additional significant income in
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.
Secondly
, the movement increases the level of employment rates as
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businesses needed a lot of employees to run daily tasks. Meanwhile, a lot of skilled employees were imported from
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other cities to
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larger demands in housing workers, transportation drivers, and restaurant staff that need to manage very well with loads of
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. Moving into another district
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also
has some major disadvantages like
destruction
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of the environment and increases
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crime rates. Generally, the industries that tried to exploit natural resources impacted the local natural life.
Nevertheless
, the authorities deploy green regulations for each company that exploits
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local resources.
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tax
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to bring more funds to build green
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.
Moreover
, humans can
also
create more serious situations where criminal issues are involved. The presence of a considerable number of employees with a lot of money to spend, and often carrying valuables
such
as cutting-edge gadgets and cars, increases the attraction for criminals to do
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. To conclude, despite the destructive effect of the environment and
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of
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rate, it actually can be managed by increasing awareness of paying
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and developing safer securities. It
also
has an extremely beneficial impact on the local economy with wider jobs for the local people. I believe that
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benefits of regulations outweigh
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drawbacks.
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