Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band

Dear James, I am very much delighted
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your invitation to your birthday party and my best wishes are always with you. I am
also
very glad that you rely on my suggestion and writing
this
letter in response to your request. Let's celebrate your day and make it memorable. I am sure you would have already done but as a side note, I suggest you invite all our friends.
Firstly
, I suggest booking a table at the
resort
by the name "George Resorts", which is very suitable for
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of parties. It is around 5 km from your home. It offers a variety of delicious dishes and liquors.
Last
week I have attended a party at
this
resort
and I was astonished by the service. I guarantee that we all will have a good time there.
Secondly
, as you are turning 25
this
year and all the attendees are adults, I find there is no wrong in hosting beer at the party, so I wonder if you can afford it. I know it
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bit money
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suggestion but right now the
resort
is offering a huge discount for birthday parties. Let me know your thoughts so that I can assist you in booking the
resort
. Thanks, John.
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