Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band

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Dear James, I am very much delighted

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your invitation to your birthday party and my best wishes are always with you. I am

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very glad that you rely on my suggestion and writing

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letter in response to your request. Let's celebrate your day and make it memorable. I am sure you would have already done but as a side note, I suggest you invite all our friends.

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, I suggest booking a table at the

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by the name "George Resorts", which is very suitable for

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of parties. It is around 5 km from your home. It offers a variety of delicious dishes and liquors.

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week I have attended a party at

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and I was astonished by the service. I guarantee that we all will have a good time there.

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, as you are turning 25

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year and all the attendees are adults, I find there is no wrong in hosting beer at the party, so I wonder if you can afford it. I know it

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suggestion but right now the

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is offering a huge discount for birthday parties. Let me know your thoughts so that I can assist you in booking the

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. Thanks, John.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

209 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

milestone birthday
themed party
fancy dress
black-tie event
elegant
sophisticated
atmosphere
venue
rooftop
cozy
trendy
garden venue
DJ
live jazz band
interactive entertainment
photo booth
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