Whether or not someone achieves his or her goal in life is mostly a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the likelihood of achieving success mainly depends on one's luck. In my opinion, I can hardly agree with

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idea. To some extent, people do need opportunities to reach their goals. To illustrate, there are thousands of talented football players who want to be

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and outstanding as Ronaldo and Messi. Some of them just need a chance to show themselves on the global stage or they would never be noticed by the public.

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, in terms of the movie industry,

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, many amateur producers actually have excellent ideas and they require an investor to support them to realize their dream but only a few of them are lucky enough to receive financial support. Despite the arguments mentioned above, I believe that motivation and dedication are more important for anyone who wants to achieve a goal.

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, scientists and doctors dedicate themselves to the study of science and medicine before they become accomplished.

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, famous sports players gain their fame by training hard and

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has nothing to do with luck.

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, Messi, a well-known football athlete, reaches his position through years of practice and I do not consider his success

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any connection with luck.

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, numerous employees are motivated to make a living on their own and work hard to lead a promising life. In conclusion,

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sometimes people need to be lucky enough to reach their goals, I believe that it is dedication and motivation that allows most of us to achieve success in life.