theme: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play ,a concert,or sporting event)is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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favorite
show or concert is more Change the spelling
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grateful
greateful
than watching the same feast, or event on television. While it is really enjoyable to attend and Correct your spelling
grateful
bring
a lot of positive emotions, and adrenaline after live performances, it is unlikely tedious to watch all of these shows sitting on the sofa. Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
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essay will discuss why eventually participating alive is much more delightful.
Watching the same event on television might be tedious,but it is one of the fledgling, best ways to not waste hundreds of millions. For example
, a person who lives in a faraway city or country will be a bit complicated to attend. In addition
, they not only will spend they are money on tickets for another country also
they are amount of situations that require hazardous consequences. Many of them are teenagers or kids who merely wanna have the aim to attend a concert,but the parents’ decision is one the top of their wants. For these reasons, people that can attend be attended will be attended.
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but also
Conversely
,there are many people that can easily afford themselves many emotions by participating in concerts, sporting event
, or shows. Fix the agreement mistake
events
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who do
who does
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not have any desire to watch these types of events on television ,providing that , it significantly declines your health. It is much better and enjoyable to dance, sing,and have fun with spectators that Correct your spelling
who do
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affinity with
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these Correct your spelling
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celebrities
celebrites
and many of them can be future friends. For these reasons, people prefer to attend and see, watch with their Correct your spelling
celebrities
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,s and have unforgettable Fix the agreement mistake
eyes
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emotions
emotons
and memory.
In conclusion, it is true that attending Correct your spelling
emotions
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a live performance
live performances
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is much
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doing the same thing at home. I think it is really important to spend more money than usual but brings amounts of adrenaline.Correct your spelling
than
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