To succeed a business one need to know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is said that being good at

maths

is crucial in order to reach success in a business. I entirely oppose

this

statement as there are various factors that lead to a successful operation. It is true that I believe that there are enormous reasons why a company can be successful. First and foremost, marketing is an essential milestone. As we all know, enterprises make different advertisements by finding well-known celebrities or creating brainwashing slogans in an attempt to attract consumers to purchase the product

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and

thus

boost sales. Multiple pieces of research demonstrate that over 85% of the firms claimed market strategies are the key factor to reaching profit maximization, which reveals that without the help of marketing, a business may

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to gain massive profit.

In contrast

, being good at calculation may not help the field earn more capital, as

maths

can only determine the market information rather than increasing their customer

target

group.

In addition

, perfect cooperation in the enterprise can be one step closer to success, as each department works closely,

as well as

, friendly can increase working productivity and efficiency. On

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whole, cooperation and marketing are far more significant than good at

maths

.

Nevertheless

, it is not uncommon for entrepreneurs to argue that calculus is the bread and butter in terms of a successful business.

It is clear that

the knowledge of math is wide, from statistics to graphs. To achieve a field

target

, a calculation has to be used,

such

as making a graph to reflect their

target

consumers or calculating the statistics in response to the profit earning so as to apply appropriate methods to boost sales.

For instance

, if the firm found out its

target

group is children

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it can make more cartoon-liked advertisements in an attempt to draw teens' attention. It depicts that

maths

is vital to

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what is happening in the field.

By contrast

, I can't stand by

this

argument, as there are massive factors that determine whether a company can be victorious,

for example

, marketing. In a nutshell, I strongly disagree with

this

statement as reasons, like marketing and cooperation between

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are

also

affecting whether the company can reach a successful.