You live near a recreation ground. A local school brings pupils to the recreation ground to do sports, such as football and cricket, but recently this caused some problems. Write to the head of the school. -explain why you enjoy living by the recreation ground -describe the recent problems -and say what you think the school should do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Erica and I live

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Green Street, across the street from the main entrance to Central Park where your

school

students

often have

sports

practice and matches. I am writing to raise my concern regarding your

school

making

students

sports

at the recreation

ground

which is around where I live. Living by the recreation

ground

is really convenient for me to do some physical exercise and keep me relaxed. But now it is occupied by your

school

pupils. I have no idea why your

school

takes

students

to the recreation

ground

. In fact, their coming has greatly influenced our usual activities. I can think of several negative consequences of

students

doing

sports

on our recreational grounds.

Firstly

, the leisure

ground

is becoming overcrowded.

For example

, people living around the

ground

, including me , not having a place to do some outdoor activities. Which may result in

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developing

devloping

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developing

a sedentary lifestyle and causes health problems.

Secondly

, the noise when

students

were doing

sports

made me feel bothered.

Finally

, idle fitness instruments are

also

becoming less and less. I believe

this

question observes close attention.

Your

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Yours

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faithfully Erica Xia

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