Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that young kids should attend

nursery

Use synonyms

or kindergarten before school. Others believe that

children

Use synonyms

below 6 years old can spend all day with their parents. In my

opinion

Add a comma

,opinion

show examples

I completely agree with the

first

Linking Words

view because there are many reasons behind

this

Linking Words

, and in

this

Linking Words

essay

Add a comma

,essay

show examples

I will discuss both views and draw my own conclusion.

First

Linking Words

of all , sending

children

Use synonyms

to

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

at a very early age gives

the

Correct pronoun usage

them the

show examples

advantages

Fix the agreement mistake

advantage

show examples

of being around other kids and teachers. The reason behind

this

Linking Words

is that might provide them with a nice educational environment that motivates them to socially interact and study .

For example

Linking Words

, there are many researchers who found that

children

Use synonyms

who

Change the pronoun

whom

show examples

they

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

went to

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

before primary school are more intelligent and smart and they gain higher scores in all subjects rather than those who attend directly to primary

schools

Use synonyms

.

Moreover

Linking Words

, attending

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

will prepare them to be ready for the

second

Linking Words

step.

For instance

Linking Words

, attending kindergarten will assist them to know basic things

such

Linking Words

as

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

letters and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

numbers and the main behaviour

such

Linking Words

as how to eat and how to respect old people which might make them super ready.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, others people believe that young

children

Use synonyms

are not supposed to go to the

nursery

Use synonyms

and they can go directly to primary

schools

Use synonyms

.

Firstly

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

is because some parents prefer to teach their own

children

Use synonyms

the basic things and spend most of their time with them.

Secondly

Linking Words

, they need to save their money for something vital

such

Linking Words

as the cost of

children

Use synonyms

’s university if they get older rather than to expenses for

nursery

Use synonyms

. The reason behind

this

Linking Words

is that

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

nowadays are incredibly expensive and they do not guarantee that their kids will benefit from them . In conclusion,

although

Linking Words

, the majority of

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

now cost a lot of money

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

just teaching

children

Use synonyms

a few things. I believe that it is very essential and crucial to attend

children

Use synonyms

to

nursery

Use synonyms

schools

Use synonyms

to can improve their communication skills .