Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that young kids should attend

nursery

or kindergarten before school. Others believe that

children

below 6 years old can spend all day with their parents. In my

opinion

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I completely agree with the

first

view because there are many reasons behind

this

, and in

this

essay

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I will discuss both views and draw my own conclusion.

First

of all , sending

children

to

nursery

schools

at a very early age gives

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advantages

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of being around other kids and teachers. The reason behind

this

is that might provide them with a nice educational environment that motivates them to socially interact and study .

For example

, there are many researchers who found that

children

who

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they

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went to

nursery

schools

before primary school are more intelligent and smart and they gain higher scores in all subjects rather than those who attend directly to primary

schools

.

Moreover

, attending

nursery

schools

will prepare them to be ready for the

second

step.

For instance

, attending kindergarten will assist them to know basic things

such

as

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letters and

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numbers and the main behaviour

such

as how to eat and how to respect old people which might make them super ready.

On the other hand

, others people believe that young

children

are not supposed to go to the

nursery

and they can go directly to primary

schools

.

Firstly

,

this

is because some parents prefer to teach their own

children

the basic things and spend most of their time with them.

Secondly

, they need to save their money for something vital

such

as the cost of

children

’s university if they get older rather than to expenses for

nursery

. The reason behind

this

is that

nursery

schools

nowadays are incredibly expensive and they do not guarantee that their kids will benefit from them . In conclusion,

although

, the majority of

nursery

schools

now cost a lot of money

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just teaching

children

a few things. I believe that it is very essential and crucial to attend

children

to

nursery

schools

to can improve their communication skills .