Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?
Today some
people
more live after finishing work
. It will discuss this
question and suggest the best solution.
Initially
part of people
after years and finishing the work
might live for many years. On the other hand
, this
society needs to some things such
as medical service excersice place and other things. While the government
should give facilities
to these people
. For ,instance oxford university's recent finding that the person who lives longer finished work
might bring a growing number of people
who needs medical services and hospitals about 30%. On the other hand
,laking the facilities
in medical places increased for treatment.
The main solution for this
issue using part of the government
's income to create a new medical place for them.moreover
this
service can support retired people
. For ,example Canadian government
recently find that creat new hospitals should decline the number of people
who are more age and need medical services, by about 40%. this
age group raise more than others for medical services. Principal programs to help this
person after creating a new hospital, using part of the parks assigned to them. Moreover
, this
place can VIP for these people
.
In conclusion, some people
after finishing work
are willing to have more facilities
and medical needs. This
age group not only want medical service but also
is willing to others facilities
. The government
can be done answer this
problem is easy. It will suggest using either tax resources or government
income to solve this
issue.Submitted by alisharifi.hse on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite