Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, some campaigns have banned smoke prevention. Other countries have
also
banned smoking. I am absolutely against smoking
,
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because smoke is harmful to
health
. In
this
essay, I will tell you about the negative consequences of smoking. On the one hand, it
lead
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to bad consequences. It can kill
people
. Smoking can affect not only the lives of
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the smoker
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smoker
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smokers
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,
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but
also
non-smokers.
For example
, a non-smoker might work in the same room as a smoker. The toxic
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substance
substances
substanse
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substance
coming out of
cigarette
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also
has a bad effect on his
health
. Heart and lung diseases are often found in
people
who smoked.
On the other hand
, the
air
is clean in all countries where smoking is prohibited.
That is
why there are no dangers to
people
's lives in those countries, and the
air
is
cleans
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. The cleaner the
air
, the healthier all the plants there will grow.
Then
the food will not be damaged.
For example
, if the
air
is polluted, it will
affected
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the food and
people
's lives.
In addition
,
consumption
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the consumption
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of poisonous food affects the
health
of both adults and children. In a nutshell, it is better to ban smoking in all public places and offices. Every government should protect human
health
and nature.
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