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The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television.​ ​ Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support you position.

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Days, the role of the
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 on
people
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 is increasing, and because of
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 , some
people
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 believe that the
Internet
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 is replacing
television
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. I agree with
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 statement because it is comfortable to
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 and every
people
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 can manage the
information
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 that they bring from the
Internet
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. At
first
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, it is comfortable and easier to
use
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 a phone and the
Internet
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 rather than a TV.
People
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 could
use
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 a telephone that has access to the
Internet
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 every time when they want while
television
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 is not always available.
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, most of humanity spends 8-10 hours working or studying and for ,them it is easier to
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 the telephone
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 always with them.
This
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 kind of fact makes the
Internet
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 and phone more popular among
people
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.
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, it is easier to search for
information
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 on the
Internet
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 than do it with the help of
television
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. The main argument in favour of
television
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 is that it provides
information
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, but nowadays when every minute of human time is important
television
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 is not a good option for searching for data.
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, a student needs to search for
information
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 and it is clear that
this
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 person will
use
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 the
Internet
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 and books,
This
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 kind of benefit of the
Internet
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 makes it more popular and increase the role of the
Internet
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 in human life. To sum up, these days the
Internet
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 is replacing most of the things that were important things in
people
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's life.
That is
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 happening because the
Internet
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 is easy to
use
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 and the person can manage it.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interactive
  • Engaging experience
  • Immediate access
  • Vast amount of information
  • Educational resources
  • Personal and professional growth
  • Social media platforms
  • Communication and connection
  • Various forms of entertainment
  • Diverse interests
  • E-commerce
  • Two-way interaction
  • Consume content
  • Create and share
  • Beneficial
  • Flourished
  • Convenience
  • One-way medium
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