Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

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we have
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many difficult
experiences
. Most
them
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hard at that
time
.
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, in the
future
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these
experiences
become
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precious to
the
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that person. I agree with the given statement and give
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a reasons
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and
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a
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examples to support it in
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body
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paragraph.
First
and foremost, a number of
people
have tough events in their lives that seem difficult at that
time
but in the
future
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these events become precious as they learn a lesson from these and become successful in
future
. Explain
furthermore
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of
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successful
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people
get success by
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from their mistakes.
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, a study by the university of Tokyo reviled that most
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of
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wealthy
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and successful
people
said that
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failure
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are
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the best way to become successful.
Thus
, these
experiences
are precious.
Moreover
, most of the
time
we face hard times because of their small and big mistakes.
However
, these become good memories in the
future
and they feel good in
future
. As they remember
their
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time
when they start their career.
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of Newyork says that most
high level
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people
said that
time
when they do their
first
job is
most
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valuable
time
to them. They
also
said that they feel difficult
that
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time
. In conclusion,
i
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agree with it because these
experiences
are precious as they become good memories and teach us good lessons.
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