Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a frequent theme
that is
discussed a lot these days, whether professional athletes should take care of their behaviour on and off the field. Some people believe that the Linking Words
actions
done by sportsmen do not matter that much, as long they are doing their job well. Use synonyms
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, I disagree with the statement above because sportsmen and sportswomen often are seen as role models.
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of all, athletes should be aware of their power, young people consider them idols. Famous players should take care of their Linking Words
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and behaviours not only while on the field but most important during their private life. Use synonyms
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is because if a person is really that famous his/her Linking Words
actions
are instantly reported on various social media like Twitter and Facebook. Use synonyms
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, it happened that a famous basketball player of the charlotte hornets was accused of domestic violence by his wife and in a nick of Linking Words
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the news was all around the Internet.
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, misbehaving is always wrong, especially if Linking Words
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is done by people who have a huge influence on society. In the NBA, Linking Words
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, there always has been the thought of "shut up and dribble" which is a philosophy that suggests that players don't need to be put in the position to talk about everything except for basketball. Linking Words
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a philosophy that I don't understand because those athletes have a widespread community that follows them and it is their duty to portray a positive and healthy image.
To conclude, I believe that sportsmen should take care of their Linking Words
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on and off the fieldUse synonyms
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because they are seen as role models by a huge part of the societyRemove the comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite