With a growing world population one of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

World
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is facing the problem of overpopulation and giving
foods
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food
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to these people is
crucial
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matter nowadays. As with the increase in
growth
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the growth
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rate of people the difficulty in feeding them
also
arises so, according to
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the narrative
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of some individuals genetically modified foods give an answer to all these issues. I partially agree with the given statement because
this
is the need of
the
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time to shift towards a viable solution
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this
problem. On the one hand, GM foodstuff has a plethora of benefits and some will be discussed here.
Firstly
, they are resistant to pesticides, viruses and other diseases as the genes of these crops, vegetables and fruits are encoded for the better and desired features.
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, the shelf life of
corns
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and potatoes
are
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longer due to the alterations in their genetics.
Secondly
, their
nutrients
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levels are improved because of changes made in their DNA, like golden rice has more nutrients than normal rice
thus
it fulfils the requirement of vitamins in the body.
Thirdly
, the flavour and attractiveness of crops are enhanced in the process of genetic engineering as the colour of
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apples
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and cherries are extra bright and beautiful when they are produced through
this
process.
On the contrary
,
drawbacks
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of
GM related
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items are primarily, the contaminations
it
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cause
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to the surrounding environment are very dangerous
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, other insects and plants that feed from these harvests can get their
DNA's
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as altered and which could have
an adverse effects
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on the food chain.
Moreover
, it
also
creates negative impacts on the health of humans
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some can even get allergic reactions while others could
diagnosed
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with cancer. It can
also
create antibacterial resistance in a person's body due to which his reaction to certain diseases will be changed. In conclusion, after discussing both
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views, I believe that genetically bioengineered products could be used to a certain extent
however
, more research is required in
this
field to overcome its drawbacks.
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