Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that
people
tend to
knowing
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about a new
language
only for
traveling
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travelling
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or working in abroad.
However
, I strongly agree with those who feel that there have other purposes
of
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for
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learning a foreign
language
. On the one hand, those who support travel or
works
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work
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should be the main reasons to
learning
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learn
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a foreign
language
say that when
people
know a foreign
language
besides
their mothers’
tonge
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tongue
, they might be managed lucrative jobs in another country.
For example
,
last
year a report has been published in the daily newspaper that a huge number of
labors
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labours
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go to many countries in the
Middle-East form
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Middle East from
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Bangladesh with
the
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apply
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high salaries, and they all have to be passed in
Arabic
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the Arabic
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language
.
Consequently
, learning Arabic is becoming popular day by day among Bangladeshi
people
to
getting
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get
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foreign jobs.
In addition
, international
travelers
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travellers
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are increasing around the world, and almost every
countries
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country
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are welcoming visitors through their
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tourism
toursim
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tourism
industries.
As a result
, many
people
are
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eager
eagered
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eager
to
learning
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learn
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different languages before visiting
in
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apply
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other countries.
On the other hand
, in my opinion, the most significant purposes of knowing languages are trading with foreign buyers and introducing
with
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to
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the cultures
of
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apply
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overseas. If individuals fail to communicate properly with foreigners, their businesses could be declined detrimentally.
For instance
, recently a study has shown that international merchants prefer those traders who are bilingual and can communicate fluently.
Furthermore
, according to a pool online most of the educated
people
in
modern
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era
interested
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are interested
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to know the cultural values, traditions, and history of various nations.
Therefore
, only when individuals will be introduced
with
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to
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the
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apply
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outlandish languages, their
wisdoms
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wisdom
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will be enhanced elaborately. In conclusion,
although
the reasons
of
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for
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knowing a foreign
language
could be visiting new places or working in foreign companies undoubtedly,
however
, I firmly believe that
world-wide
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worldwide
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business and gathering
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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should be main the purposes.
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