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PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
Nowadays,
plastic
 is
world’s
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the world’s
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 greatest
scourges
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facing
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faced
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 by humanity and other living organisms. Day by day uses of
plastics
 has become
increase
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, but individuals do not understand about
environment
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environmental
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 pollution
cause
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caused
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 by using
this
 man-made
plastic
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
about
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damage does
plastic
do
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to
environment
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the environment
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 and
also
 discuss
about
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the solution that should
done
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be done
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 by
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human beings
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human-beings
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human beings
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 as well as local authorities.
To begin
,
use
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the use
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 of synthetic
plastic
 is cause damage to the
environment
. Recently, individuals
use
 most of the
products
 which are made
by
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of
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plastics
 because it is inexpensive as compared to other
products
 and
also
 it has good strength.
However
, when
people
use
 any kind of
plastic
products
such
 as bags, spoons, glasses, bottles etc.
then
 they
use
 it once and
then
thrown
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throw
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 anywhere
for example
, in
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the river
a river
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river
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rivers
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 or in
landfill
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a landfill
the landfill
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.
As a result
,
the
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marine animals consume these
plastics
 and they become
die
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deadly
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.
Consequently
,
this
plastic
 is very dangerous for
the
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marine animals because their death or even chances of any kind of throat disease will increase when they consume it.
Secondly
,
people
 throw these
products
 of
plastics
 anywhere like in
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a park
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park
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parks
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 or
garden
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gardens
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. Which is
also
 dangerous for the
environment
, animals and
human
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humans
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 as well. To reduce the waste of
plastics
, every individual and local authorities should take some steps.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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 should ban these man-made
plastics
. And
instead
 of
that
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,that
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 they should encourage
the
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people
 to
use
 bioplastic which is made from renewable resources
such
 as corn, potato, sorghum, sago,
rice
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and rice
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. It
also
 decomposes in soil within a week and
also
 soluble in some solvents like water, ethanol, methanol and acetyl ether.
Consequently
, there are no chances to harm the
environment
.
Secondly
, every
human-being
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human being
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 should understand the value of nature and they should keep
this
plastic
 garbage in dustbins and
also
 government should take fines against every individual who
take
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takes
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 these
products
 of
plastics
 anywhere. Agglomerating all the points elaborated I would like to conclude that
plastic
 can cause damage to the
environment
,
people
 and
also
 other living organisms. So,
government
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the government
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 should take
a
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apply
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fine against thrown
plastic
 garbage anywhere and
also
people
 should
use
 bioplastic
instead
 of synthetic
plastic
. So,
environment
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environmental
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 pollution can
be control
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be controlled
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.
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