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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

#people #idea #schools #yong #person #parent #skills
Parenting
skills
 are something that most
people
 learn when they become
parents
. It is arguable for schools to include that particular skill in the study plan,
thus
 young ones could be a better
parent
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 in the future. Overall, adding a new skill as part of the study plan could be a good idea,
however
, some
skills
 might not be suitable for
young
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 age. These past few years, there are some news circulating in the media that show many adolescents got pregnant. Their lack of parenting
skills
 might
endangered
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 the unborn child's future, which is why some
people
 thought it would be a great idea for young ones to familiarize themselves with
parents
' responsibilities,
such
 as diaper changing, dealing with toddler's
tantrum
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 and so on. Making
this
 mandatory study in
school
, parenting
skills
 might help young
parents
 to be more prepared.
In contrast
, preventing adolescents to become young
parents
 might be better than preparing them to be one. The root of the issue is not whether students will be
a
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good
parent
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 or not. The most important lesson that needs to be
add
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 in every
school
 is sex education, which
still
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 considered
as
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a taboo topic in some countries. Young
people
 need to know the
basic
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basics
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 of human reproduction and the life after
baby
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 would
be
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, and hopefully could make
a
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better
decision
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 for their life. In conclusion, different
skills
 are learned based on age and needs, which means not all
skills
 have to be introduced at
school
 as a mandatory subject. Parenting
skills
 are great for someone who is ready to be a parent, not young
people
 who
is
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 still in
school
.
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