In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays ,it is trended among

people

to have a personal fitness coach rather than plan for their exercise time and

also

their diet by themselves.

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currently it becomes very popular and common, I think it has not had a positive

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so far.Now

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I would like to tell some reasons

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why

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hire a personal trainer and

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I am writing about how it influences

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people

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life? and

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begin with , progress in technology has

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changed so you will not be surprised by seeing its

effect

on your life. After the internet became viral ,

people

have access to their requirements easily and without much effort ,

for instance

, they can stay at home and do their tasks online and

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make money as a freelancer,

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it has some positive effects but it grows

people

too much easy going

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example ,they do not need to take much for getting information about an academic subject they just surf

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the internet for less than one hour and collect a useful knowledge which they need.

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, I think technology is one of the reasons that

people

would rather hire a personal trainer because it is more comfortable. I believe, it is very important you think about ,

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it a positive or negative development, because you will see its

effect

on the future generation . For some reason , I think it has a negative

effect

.

Firstly

, when you go to the gym with others you can find new friends and become more sociable.

Secondly

, going to the gym with others may bring out our competitive sense and you will get your exercise seriously .

Finally

, you have to get more responsibilities , if you want to plan for your diet and exercise time and

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you have to get more responsible and it will help you become more responsible.I believe you will not be a successful person unless you try it and get more practice in it. In conclusion , I would state that the world is moving fast with the growing trend of hiring personal trainers and these resources are impacting negatively development in

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life.