Nowadays robots do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have a more advantages than disadvantages?
More
robots
are “employed” to do certain jobs than humans nowadays. In this
disquisition
I will emphasize Add a comma
,disquisition
with
both pros and cons and will state my opinion in the conclusion.
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apply
First
and foremost robots
are able to work
faster and cost way less
expenses than human workers. Change the quantifier
fewer
This
is because businesses and companies do not have to pay them a monthly salary as they would normally have to do. Furthermore
there are no costs needed for health Add a comma
,Furthermore
insurances
. Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
In other
words
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robots
do not need to go on sick leave and require such
insurances
. A recent study conducted by the Harvard Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
school
of science showed that Change the capitalization
School
robots
can work
up to 20 times faster than a regular human employee. Consequently
those machines are very beneficial in our today’s society.
Regarding the Add a comma
,Consequently
disadvantages
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,disadvantages
robots
take away occupations from men and women. Therefore
there may be a higher amount of unemployed in the future than it has ever been before. Hence
the government had to pay high rates of unemployment fees. In other
words
individuals are not able to Add a comma
,words
work
their regular jobs anymore because of their faster and less expensive technological competition. Additionally
people will suffer from not pursuing a job which gives them a certain sense in their life as well as not receiving a monthly salary. These issues may lead to Add a comma
,Additionally
a
higher depression and suicide rate in our society.
In Remove the article
apply
conclusion
I opine, that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because even though Add a comma
,conclusion
robots
might be faster than humans it
will lead to more problems and Correct pronoun usage
they
causes
harm to us humans which cannot be the case in any way. People have a right to Correct subject-verb agreement
cause
work
which should not be given up to metallic beings.Submitted by luisapressl01 on
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