Some people believe that countries should produce food that populations eats, and import food as less as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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As one of the main critical necessary needs of societies
food
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has become a crucial problem for the government in recent decades. I am interested in the idea that
countries
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should produce foods and their supply
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internally just to the extent
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not strictly dependent on a certain monopoly of
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, not more. On one hand, historically it has been proven that negotiation on the
food
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supply
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is one of the critical aspects of most serious international deals, so
countries
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will lose their bargaining power even in other directly unrelated fields unless they have resilient and reliable
food
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supply alternatives.
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, in case a country has quite enough alternative
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to supply each strategic
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like rice, milk and else, it seems reasonable that import them or just focus on the domestication of the higher
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of the value
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like
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processing industries,
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in case of having less option, the country should invest on primary chains like agriculture sector or grazing animals for the production of meat.
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, strict and unrealistic decisions for supplying most of the
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value
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internally are neither possible nor beneficial for
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. In better words, in some rare cases,
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governments about
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importing, like
Iran
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's government policies in the early 2010s,that they decide to produce most of the
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supply
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by themselves internally.
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attitude toward the supply
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, in
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a globalized and interwoven era, is due to the lack of practical understanding of how commercial networks inherently work especially in the
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chain
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.
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could cause water-sourcing challenges in the country, since most of the agriculture and
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supply
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industries are heavily water-consuming.
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regardless of what the public officials want consciously or unconsciously will absolutely result in failure, exactly like what happened to
Iran
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in the later years of the 2010s. In fact, not only did
Iran
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fail in its policy for independence in agricultural productions like wheat production, but
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most of the water resources, like Eurumia lake, have been destroyed and dried out due to
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aggressive policies. To conclude, while it's crucial for the government to not be dependent on a few certain
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for
food
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supply, taking aggressive measures like what
Iran
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did in the 2010s will not work at all and could be detrimental to the environment.
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