You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
finds you well.I am writing
this
letter with regard to a purchase I had online on your website
last
week .
First
of all , I would like to tell you some detail about the dresses I bought . I ordered a plain T-shirt and two pairs of short skirts one of them medium and another one large and
also
pair of casual jeans . But unfortunately , you made a mistake about the skirts , I received both of them large
thus
I want to send them back for a change. Honestly , I want it for a special event which will attend
next
week and for my busy work time during the
next
week I can not come to your store and change it by myself so I would appreciate it very much if you look into the matter quickly. Faithfully, Neda
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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