You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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finds you well.I am writing

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letter with regard to a purchase I had online on your website

last

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week .

First

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of all , I would like to tell you some detail about the dresses I bought . I ordered a plain T-shirt and two pairs of short skirts one of them medium and another one large and

also

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pair of casual jeans . But unfortunately , you made a mistake about the skirts , I received both of them large

thus

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I want to send them back for a change. Honestly , I want it for a special event which will attend

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week and for my busy work time during the

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week I can not come to your store and change it by myself so I would appreciate it very much if you look into the matter quickly. Faithfully, Neda

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do advantage of this development outweigh this disadvantages.