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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest

#influence #beings #world #ecosystem #extinction #species #loss #bio-diversity
Some people believe that the extinction of some
plants
 and
animals
are
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 the major problem of today’s world while others think that there are existing more essential environmental troubles. Nowadays, the death of
a different kinds
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different kinds
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 of
animals
 and the vanishing of a wide range of
plants
 concern not only researchers but
also
 ordinary humans. Deforestation and a rapid
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extension
Extention
extention
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extension
 of
logging
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the logging
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 industry affect the lives of all inhabitants of nature.
This
 has resulted in
vanishing
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 of trees in many areas of the planet.
Moreover
, the
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consequences
consequenses
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consequences
 of
such
inclination
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 extend far beyond the
disappearing
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 of
plants
 and could lead to
dying
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 out of
animals
 as well as insects because forests
are often serve
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 as
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a home
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home
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 and vital
source
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 of nutrition for them.
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, mankind’s activity harmfully
influence
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 the existence of
animals
 and
plants
. Are there any other more significant environmental challenges? Exactly, yes. In my opinion, air pollution caused by factories and cars is a big problem of the present. It is known and proved by plenty of scientists that contamination is one of the head reasons
of
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myriad
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of
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diseases as well as cancer. Some researches suggest that citizens of cities are much more reluctant to
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illness
illnes
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illnesses
 than the population of rural areas where
plants
 are less common. Society should take steps to overcome
pollution
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problem
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 in order to preserve our globe.
Otherwise
, it might result in
increased
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an increased
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 number of sick. Environmental problems are one of the main issues of the modern world and appeal to all society because
its
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 aftermaths touch
on
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everyone. (258 words)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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