Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest

Some people believe that the extinction of some
plants
and
animals
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the major problem of today’s world while others think that there are existing more essential environmental troubles. Nowadays, the death of
a different kinds
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of
animals
and the vanishing of a wide range of
plants
concern not only researchers but
also
ordinary humans. Deforestation and a rapid
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extension
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of
logging
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industry affect the lives of all inhabitants of nature.
This
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of trees in many areas of the planet.
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, the
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consequences
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extend far beyond the
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of
plants
and could lead to
dying
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out of
animals
as well as insects because forests
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as
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home
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and vital
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of nutrition for them.
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, mankind’s activity harmfully
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the existence of
animals
and
plants
. Are there any other more significant environmental challenges? Exactly, yes. In my opinion, air pollution caused by factories and cars is a big problem of the present. It is known and proved by plenty of scientists that contamination is one of the head reasons
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myriad
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of
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diseases as well as cancer. Some researches suggest that citizens of cities are much more reluctant to
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illnes
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than the population of rural areas where
plants
are less common. Society should take steps to overcome
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problem
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in order to preserve our globe.
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, it might result in
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number of sick. Environmental problems are one of the main issues of the modern world and appeal to all society because
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everyone. (258 words)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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