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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buiding they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this ?

#countries #people #history #house #research
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Nowadays,
people
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 become highly interested in the
history
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 of their
houses
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 or the building they live in.
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 will discuss the reason for
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 trend and how
people
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 search for that information.
To begin
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,
people
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 want to search about their property's
history
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 because they are trying to add more
value
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 to it. Finding interesting information will give their home more emotional
value
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 on top of its original
value
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.
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,
houses
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 that belong to a famous singer or actor are sold for a higher price than other normal
houses
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. Because
people
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 think the emotional
value
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 of those
houses
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 will remain constant and may even increase in the future.
As a result
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, if they ever decide to sell the
house
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, the buyer will pay a higher price because of its
history
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. They can research
this
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 historical information either by asking their neighbours or by searching the internet. Many find those two ways the fastest ways to find answers to their questions about the
history
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 of their
houses
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. They can ask their neighbour about the
history
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 and if there is anyone who knows the true
value
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 of the area around him, or they can take some pictures and post them on the internet and wait for some experts to answer their questions.
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, before we bought our
house
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 two years ago, I asked the neighbour, who lived by the
house
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, if there was something special about it, and they showed me a
history
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 book that contained all the historical events and
people
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 who had lived there. In conclusion, knowing the
history
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 of your
house
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 will add more emotional
value
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 to it, and two of the best ways to search for its
history
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 are by visiting the neighbours and asking them or by searching on the internet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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