Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.

Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well, I’m writing
to
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you
this
urgent letter
, to
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ask you a favour. As you already know my sister’s wedding is on the
next
month, as she
trust
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on
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my musical taste, She
ask
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me to organize
this
task, and you are the
first
person coming to my mind, I will not find a talented performer better
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you for
this
occasion. The wedding topic is romance,
that is
why we need a special live song while the couple doing their principal dance. I heard you
last
year at
anissa’s
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bird day signing “you’re mine” which was a real
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masterpiece
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master piece
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.
Moreover
, I think
this
song will match perfectly with the dance. The budget for the job is quite important it will cover
also
your flights, plus you will be
welcomed
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at our house during
this
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days, so there is no need for
an
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hotel. I hope you will agree, and I’m waiting for
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. Best wishes Dounia
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