Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them? Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Certain
people
believe that raising Add an article
a pet
pet
in a house supports Fix the agreement mistake
pets
kids
to grow in an ethical manner,
because Remove the comma
apply
children
are expose
to domestic Change the verb form
are exposed
animals
and able to learn responsibility, love and care Correct your spelling
for other
forother
living Correct your spelling
for other
being
. Whereas, others assume raising Fix the agreement mistake
beings
pets
cause safety issues such
as diseases and physical threats for children
, therefore
, domestic animals
are not safe for kids
. In my opinion
I believe keeping Add a comma
,opinion
pets
will beneficial to children
in
Change preposition
at
their
young age.
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a
On the other hand
, minor
proportion of Add an article
a minor
people
think
keeping Change the verb form
thinks
pets
harmful
for Add a missing verb
is harmful
kids
, because some animals
can be aggressive in various situations, for example
sometimes dogs and cats can behave violently with kids
and even there are chances to
physical harm when playing with Change preposition
of
kids
. Likewise
, some individual believes pets
can spread diseases, in other
words
cats, rabbits and birds can cause asthma not only for Add the comma(s)
,words
children
but also
for adults.
On the other hand
, majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
think keeping pets
helps children
to take responsibilities
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responsibility
,
when Remove the comma
apply
kids
raising
Wrong verb form
raise
pets
, they are able to look after them in proper
way teaches them to make Correct article usage
the proper
appropriate
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the appropriate
an appropriate
decision
. Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
This
will support to improve
Change the verb form
improving
mental
health and decision-making skills of Correct article usage
the mental
kids
. Similarly
, emotional connection with their companion will enhance love and caring nature for other living beings. For instance
, Add an article
the kid
a kid
kid
who Fix the agreement mistake
kids
raising
Wrong verb form
raise
pets
have
more empathy Change the verb form
has
over
others than Change preposition
for
kids
without pets
. Moreover
, children
can get alone
with Correct your spelling
along
pets
to spend some quality times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
to support
themselves physically and mentally.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
supporting
children
who owns
domestic Change the verb form
own
animals
,
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apply
learns
good habits by caring Change the verb form
learn
their
companion. Change preposition
for their
Also
, most people
assume keeping pets
not
a threat to Add a missing verb
is not
children
but beneficial for their wellbeing. Letting children
to
interact with Change the verb form
apply
pets
allows Correct pronoun usage
them to
to learn
responsibility, love and care, as well as support to improve good ethical practices Change the verb form
learning
in
Change preposition
at
their
young age.Change the word
a
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