In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country. Others think that the government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

There are many discrepancies in index salary per
country
, some
countries
earn much higher than others.
Thus
,
this
incites a debate about whether is a good thing to do, some would argue that salaries need to keep under some certain level and others
also
argue that it will
also
be benefitting the
country
in the end. The
first
opinion for
this
would be, that it is a wise choice to give a higher standard for salaries because it
also
reflects how high the taxes and living costs on some
countries
.
Moreover
, with how complex the economic system is, we
also
need to understand the position of the
country
regarding healthcare, education, and many else. So, understanding that the
country
is
also
responsible for the well-being of its people it is logical to have a higher standard of salary.
Additionally
, we could take examples of
this
kind of
countries
would be Finland, England, and many more Europe
countries
.
Second
, the higher salaries would
also
have a bad impact on the whole nation's economic stability. Especially in developing
countries
that still have low education standards and rely on their natural resource.
Although
, we
also
need to be aware of forbidden
money
, especially from corruption and collusion which happened in systemic happenstance like in Indonesia. So, many government workers had
money
, not from their hustle but given or they ask for
money
from the common people to help them even though it is their job from the start. In conclusion, I would choose a higher standard of salary if it is reflecting the living cost and taxes in my
country
.
Furthermore
, I would only want the
money
that comes from my hustle and not from forbidden sources.
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