In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country. Others think that the government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

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There are many discrepancies in index salary per

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, some

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earn much higher than others.

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this

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incites a debate about whether is a good thing to do, some would argue that salaries need to keep under some certain level and others

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argue that it will

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be benefitting the

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in the end. The

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opinion for

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would be, that it is a wise choice to give a higher standard for salaries because it

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reflects how high the taxes and living costs on some

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, with how complex the economic system is, we

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need to understand the position of the

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regarding healthcare, education, and many else. So, understanding that the

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responsible for the well-being of its people it is logical to have a higher standard of salary.

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, we could take examples of

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kind of

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would be Finland, England, and many more Europe

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, the higher salaries would

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have a bad impact on the whole nation's economic stability. Especially in developing

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that still have low education standards and rely on their natural resource.

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, we

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need to be aware of forbidden

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, especially from corruption and collusion which happened in systemic happenstance like in Indonesia. So, many government workers had

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, not from their hustle but given or they ask for

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from the common people to help them even though it is their job from the start. In conclusion, I would choose a higher standard of salary if it is reflecting the living cost and taxes in my

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, I would only want the

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that comes from my hustle and not from forbidden sources.

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