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Nowadsys many people chose to be self-employed, rather than to wrk fo a company or organisation. Which might be this the case? what could be the disadvantages of bing self-employed?

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Nowadays the majority of society tries to find freelance jobs rather than working full-time in a company. In
this
 essay, It is discussed several reasons for
this
 trend and some disadvantages of self-employment. To commence with, people tend to be self-employed due to various reasons
such
 as working in a free environment, lack of promotions and salary increments with inflation, low salary scale, etc.
For example
, some employees believe that their earnings scale and the increment procedures are not enough when compared with the current workload of the job and the busy working environment.
Accordingly
, they tend to think of new ways of earning themselves by being self-employed.
Moreover
, they believe that if they work hard in the earlier stage
then
 they can be in a certain level of income which is higher than a wage.
Therefore
, it can be uncontrollable people's thinking patterns and
this
 might be the main reason for increasing the number of freelancers.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages of running an own work
such
 as having to face big competitors within the field, have not the entire idea of the business field, not thinking balance life patterns at the same time running
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hard time employment, etc.
For instance
, someone who resigned from a technical job going to establish an organization in the same field but he or she is lack communication and management skills. In that case, there is a great possibility to fail the new business because it is mandatory to have a sound knowledge of all aspects of the business.
Hence
, there may be some worst effects of starting your own work. To conclude, a bunch of reasons will be forced someone to be a freelancer
conversely
 it has several disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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