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Some people think that telling the truth is not always essential. It is necessary to tell lies sometimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The argument about whether the
truth
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 told or not is an ongoing debate. Many
people
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 advocate that telling the
truth
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 is not essential all the time. I disagree with
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 statement since telling lies to protect someone from pain should not be the liar's decision and the only thing society
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 by telling lies is broken trust in the community.
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, it is common that hide the facts in order to avoid hurting
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 in society.
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, many
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 prefer telling lies rather than the
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 during painful events
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 as funerals or arguments.
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, numerous individuals prefer honesty to dishonesty rather than hiding behind lies to abstain from the pain which will come afterwards.
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, neither determining to protect anybody by telling inaccurate things nor hurting that person should not be
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 decision.
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, whereas the intentions of lies are good, they still display unreality.
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, honesty is an important sign of
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's character and morality in order to assess
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.
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, if an employer learns that his workers telling lies to him, he will probably terminate their contracts because of the broken trust among them.
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, whatever the reason for hiding the facts and telling white lies, the unreality would create more disappointment than the actual facts.
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, telling lies only bring out more pain and suffering in the
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. To summarise, while some
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 believe that prefer making up excuses to
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 the
truth
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 is crucial and needed in some cases, I completely disagree with
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 statement because of the possible painful results of dishonesty.

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