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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays,
people
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 prefer texting rather than speaking
face
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 to
face
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. Some
people
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 say that spoken
communication
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 is more powerful than written
communication
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. It depends on their own
ability
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. I am against
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 a viewpoint to a large extent. My explanation is in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
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 with, these days technology has spread. So,
people
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 mostly preferred texting over calling or
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-to-
face
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 conversations. Some argued that spoken
communication
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 is better than writing. The speaking skills developed which is too hard for
people
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. while it is easy to convey to
people
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. When
people
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 speak
face
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 to
face
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 that they express their feeling. If
people
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 give fack information in front of you that they easily know about it is the wrong person.
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, politicians mostly communicate by speaking rather than writing because they want the attention of
people
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 and they
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 want to vote for won the elections.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 do not have the
ability
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 to speak in front of the public.
Therefore
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, they write messages and convey
people
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. They
also
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 have the
ability
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 to do better writing as compared to other
people
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. it is
also
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 powerful same as spoken
communication
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.
For instance
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, a journalist has the
ability
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 to convey
people
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 through their written articles and books. In conclusion, abilities are gifted by god, some
people
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 have spoken skills and some have writing skills. It is dependent on
people
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.
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, I disagree with
this
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 point of view it is only one thing considered
people
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 understand what you say. If you say in spoken or written.
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