Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples.
Is
involvement
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the involvement
youngsters
in unpaid work
reasonable or could it affect their career? For the longest time in history
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history,
youngsters
have been used as a cheap source of labor. It is believed that a child can work
as much as an adult,
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while
being paid less. Till
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To
this
day it is still common for some poverty-stricken countries to go around the law and involve children
in hard work
. I disagree thatCorrect article usage
the
involvement
of youngsters
in many different aspects is acceptable,
because it is unacceptable to take advantage of a younger person who still hasn’t fully developed his self-conscious mind. One justification would be that people who think that Remove the comma
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youngsters
should involve themselves in unpaid work
don’t see the possibility of ruining the youngster's childhood. Most of
people who decide that their Change preposition
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children
should work
from a young age
,
are parents who want their Remove the comma
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children
to be successful. It is a popular misconception that youngsters
who start working from an early age
will be up to speed with the older children
. It may be true, but by
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age
will create a barrier between the
childhood and Correct article usage
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the
adolescence. Correct article usage
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Also
, the child will not experience the importance of freedom and creativity, while
starting to work
from an early age
. Personally, I also
believe that youngsters
who do not get paid for their work
will lose a sense of motivation to do something for a reward. It will make them unmotivated to try harder in school,
because the grade wouldn’t be worth anything to them. A Remove the comma
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further
reason not to involve youngsters
in unpaid work
would be that they won’t be able to do tasks given to them properly due to
the
lack of experience. Supporters of Change the word
their
this
type of youngster involvement
in unpaid work
believe that working should be beneficial to the growing child in order to deter them from becoming lazy and unproductive members part of the community. However
, there is very little evidence to suggest that work
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working
young
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a young
age
is beneficial for the future. In conclusion, involving youngsters
in unpaid work
is unethical and, in my opinion, ineffective, both for work
and career reasons. That said, it would be useful to talk with the children
and get to know what they would want to do for a job and what kind of a
payment would suit them the best. I strongly believe that Remove the article
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involvement
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the involvement
youngsters
in unpaid work
should be based on communication between the people and their children
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