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With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,

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GM
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 or genetically modified
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 is a topic that many
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 in the world are talking about today. It affects
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 in many ways. In my point of view,
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 tendency has some benefits it cannot surpass its drawbacks.
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,
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 essay will explore both aspects, I'll give my own opinion. On the one hand,some
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 argue GM
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 are a good solution for
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 shortage. There is some thought in that. Because of that, genetically modified
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 give a lot of benefits to the agriculture industry. Because the GM seed's DNA blog is changed by scientists. So they enter the useful DNA part from it.
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 we can get a good harvest without any damage. A good example of that, is seedless oranges,grapes and strawberries. And
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 we can get good harvest throughout the year.
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, there are a number of arguments in favour of my knowledge. Some
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 said genetically modified
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 are unhealthy
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 for
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. I clearly agree with
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's genes were changed. So its effect from negative or positive. I believe those
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 affect human health. So it is a good solution we cultivate
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 for our use. We should individually force the plant plants in our garden. I think it is the best solution for the storage of
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.
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, in my , opinion there are good and bad sides
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. But in view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits the drawback of genetically modified
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 are indeed too dire to ignore
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