You live in a small apartment building. You are frequently bothered by noise from your upstairs neighbor’s apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • Describe the situation • Explain why it is a problem for you • Suggest a solution Begin your letter as follows: Dear…….

#apartment #noise #upstairs #neighbor’s #neighbour #situation #dear……

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Dear Mark, How are you doing? It is Andrew Lots, your downstairs

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neighbour

neigbour

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neighbour

. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that the

music

that you usually turned on in the evenings bothers me from my work as I am working remotely. Sometimes the

music

is that loud so I can not even hear my colleague.

To begin

with, if I did not have online work I would not pay much attention

for

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the

music

, but for

now

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that became an issue and I can not concentrate enough while having meetings. For that reason, I would like to kindly ask you consider

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possibility of turning on the

music

while I do not have working hours. It is every day from 9 am till 2 pm. I would really appreciate it if you understand me and can do your best to think out

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my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Andrew

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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156 words

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