Many students at college opt to live on campus. What are the benefits and drawbacks of campus life?
Most students at college opt to live on
campus
and they think that it’s better than live
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living
on
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at
house
. Add an article
the house
a house
Live
on Wrong verb form
Living
campus
has advantages as Add an article
a student
the student
student
can find new friends or have Fix the agreement mistake
students
time
to learn or it has disadvantages like they will miss the
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apply
home
either
spend Correct word choice
or
time
to come
to college.
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coming
To begin
with, there are a lot of advantages which makes student
stay in
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on
campus
. Add an article
the campus
Time
always plays important role in student’s
life and by saving Correct article usage
a student’s
time
, Add an article
the student
a student
student
will do all tasks which college will give to them. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Hence
in free
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their free
time
which summoned
by saving Add a missing verb
is summoned
time
, Add an article
the student
a student
student
can rest from hard work. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Secondly
, find
friends who will help you in Wrong verb form
finding
hard
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a hard
time
is Fix the agreement mistake
times
main
mission Add an article
a main
the main
on
students’ life. Change preposition
of
In
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On
campus
they might find a good Add a comma
,campus
friend
with same
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the same
thought
which Fix the agreement mistake
thoughts
student
have. Fix the agreement mistake
students
For example
, my brother who
lived on Correct pronoun usage
apply
campus
and found many friends who can help to
him in Change preposition
apply
bad
Correct article usage
a bad
time
. Fix the agreement mistake
times
As a result
, find
a Wrong verb form
finding
friend
in
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on
campus
is one of Add an article
the campus
good
Add an article
the good
a good
thing
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things
of
Change preposition
on
campus
.
On the other hand
, live
on Wrong verb form
living
campus
has disadvantages like miss home
or annoying neighbors
. Change the spelling
neighbours
Home
Correct article usage
The home
where
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, where student had lived when they were child,
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the student
a student
student
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students
had
lived when they were Unnecessary verb
apply
Add an article
a child
the child
child
is Fix the agreement mistake
children
very
warm and pleasant place and Add an article
a very
leave
the house isn’t Wrong verb form
leaving
easy
task for everyone, so due to Add an article
an easy
thought
about Correct article usage
the thought
home
which makes Add an article
the home
a home
student
miss Correct pronoun usage
their house
house
, may become Fix the agreement mistake
houses
reason
Add an article
the reason
a reason
of
depression which right now many students has it who lived on Change preposition
for
campus
. Secondly
, all experience
of Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
student
life can be broken by roommates. Bad roommates can joke on
you or they will take your tools without your permission and lose it. Change preposition
with
For instance
, my sister’s friend
who
lived on Correct pronoun usage
apply
campus
with bad
roommate, sister’s Add an article
a bad
friend
had told to her that every day was as
hell for her, because roommates always steal her items and told Change preposition
apply
to
everyone Change preposition
apply
how
she is bad and annoying even Correct word choice
that
the
evil roommate was a Correct word choice
though the
neighbor
. Change the spelling
neighbour
Therefore
, bad neighbors
will stress students and make them depressed. All know that depressed Change the spelling
neighbours
student
can do all Fix the agreement mistake
students
thing
to lose from illness even do suicide.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
things
live
on Wrong verb form
living
campus
has good
and bad Add an article
a good
side
like Fix the agreement mistake
sides
spend
Wrong verb form
spending
time
to
only study by saving Change preposition
apply
time
or always be
in conflict with Wrong verb form
being
neighbors
, but Change the spelling
neighbours
live
on Wrong verb form
living
campus
is students’
choice.Correct article usage
the students’
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