Many students at college opt to live on campus. What are the benefits and drawbacks of campus life?

Most students at college opt to live on
campus
and they think that it’s better than
live
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on
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at
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house
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the house
a house
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.
Live
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on
campus
has advantages as
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a student
the student
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student
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students
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can find new friends or have
time
to learn or it has disadvantages like they will miss
the
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apply
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home
either
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or
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spend
time
to come
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to college.
To begin
with, there are a lot of advantages which makes
student
stay
in
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on
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campus
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the campus
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.
Time
always plays important role in
student’s
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a student’s
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life and by saving
time
,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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will do all tasks which college will give to them.
Hence
in
free
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their free
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time
which
summoned
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is summoned
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by saving
time
,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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can rest from hard work.
Secondly
,
find
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finding
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friends who will help you in
hard
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a hard
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time
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times
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is
main
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a main
the main
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mission
on
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of
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students’ life.
In
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On
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campus
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,campus
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they might find a good
friend
with
same
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the same
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thought
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thoughts
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which
student
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students
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have.
For example
, my brother
who
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apply
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lived on
campus
and found many friends who can help
to
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apply
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him in
bad
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a bad
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time
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times
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.
As a result
,
find
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finding
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a
friend
in
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on
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campus
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the campus
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is one of
good
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the good
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thing
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things
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of
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on
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campus
.
On the other hand
,
live
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living
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on
campus
has disadvantages like miss
home
or annoying
neighbors
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neighbours
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.
Home
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The home
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where
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, where student had lived when they were child,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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had
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lived when they were
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a child
the child
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child
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children
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is
very
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a very
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warm and pleasant place and
leave
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leaving
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the house isn’t
easy
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an easy
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task for everyone, so due to
thought
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the thought
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about
home
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the home
a home
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which makes
student
miss
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their house
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house
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houses
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, may become
reason
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the reason
a reason
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of
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for
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depression which right now many students has it who lived on
campus
.
Secondly
, all
experience
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experiences
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of
student
life can be broken by roommates. Bad roommates can joke
on
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with
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you or they will take your tools without your permission and lose it.
For instance
, my sister’s
friend
who
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apply
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lived on
campus
with
bad
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a bad
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roommate, sister’s
friend
had told to her that every day was
as
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apply
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hell for her, because roommates always steal her items and told
to
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apply
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everyone
how
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that
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she is bad and annoying even
the
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though the
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evil roommate was a
neighbor
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neighbour
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.
Therefore
, bad
neighbors
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neighbours
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will stress students and make them depressed. All know that depressed
student
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students
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can do all
thing
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things
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to lose from illness even do suicide. In conclusion,
live
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living
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on
campus
has
good
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a good
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and bad
side
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sides
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like
spend
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spending
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time
to
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apply
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only study by saving
time
or always
be
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being
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in conflict with
neighbors
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neighbours
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, but
live
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living
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on
campus
is
students’
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the students’
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choice.
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