Some people believe that the extinction of animal species is a natural process and humans should not intervene. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that the

extinction

of animal

species

is a process which is natural. Despite people should not make any interventions in

this

field. In my opinion, I disagree

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statement because some

species

are threatened

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extinction

and need extra awareness by human beings. One reason is that without the involvement of

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the

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mankind like rangers there would be an overpopulation

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wildlife. Rangers look after the forest

animals

.

Thus

they keep an eye on the equal distribution of the various

species

.

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if

this

would not occur the ecosystem of forests and wildlife will be highly imbalanced and affected.

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many wild living

animals

in a woodland may lead to

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spread of infectious diseases which can cause mass

extinction

. Another point is that some

animals

are endangered to die out because of the climate crisis which is mainly caused by

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human being and not by nature.

Firstly

many individuals do not look after their ecological footprint.

Moreover

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plastic consumption is dramatically high nowadays and leads to pollution of our seas .A green peace study recently found out that multiple very rare plankton kinds are endangered to die out because of

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sea pollution. On one

hand

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this

might not only result in the

extinction

of

this

one

species

but will

also

concern others

which

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for illustration use plankton as their main nourishment. In

conclusion

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this

arguments

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shows

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that the

extinction

of certain

animals

is not always a natural process and the citizens of

this

world have to take action and care to prevent

this

to happen.