The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.
Brazil is the host of the World Cup which is one of the biggest international sports events. It can not be denied that it brings the advantages of health improvement and excellent habits but it
also
causes a lot of players jury during the practice process and official match.
On the one hand, football is marvellous for positive energy and creating wonderful patterns due to the fact it is a ponderous sport that required players to be active for a long time. In other words
, it can help them learn how to arrange their schedule, and control their diet to maintain a fitness figure. In addition
, the sport could give a clearer vision for teamwork and bring back victory together. For example
, Arsenal is a strong team who achieved a lot of winning prizes thanks to the union.
On the other hand
, the game has several negative aspects we should keep an eye on because is a competitive game so we might get an injury. If it is light, it will only be an external wound, severe might lead to ligament rupture. Footballers such
as Timo Werner or Reece James had to stop their careers because of this
. Besides
that, violence or hatred may arise between viewers of two opposing teams.
In conclusion, football could be terrifying by the potential risk, and yet can still bring excitement and good benefits along.Submitted by workwithmanh1989 on
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