It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages.
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an average
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a
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the
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a scientist
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at
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example
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California Technical University and the results show that “When Change preposition
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brain
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the brain
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makes
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the human
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taking
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take
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life
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. Besides
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this
risk
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last
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a friend
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she took the risk
for her own life
to live it free and regardless. In
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This
this
year, she has a boyfriend, and she is extremely satisfied with her decision. Taking risk
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a risk
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in
special
situation like Add an article
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reflect
the importance of it.
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to
the
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apply
life
. The brave persons
who take the risks will realize the effects on their own Replace the word
people
lives
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