There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples.

Nowadays, many trends are surging up, one of

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is the increasing percentage of

noise

we hear in our life as

in

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noise

pollution.

This

trend can be a problem for our

body

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or life and needs to be stopped.

Noise

is part of our life,

this

is why human is made with

auditory

organ like ear so we can

hearing

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anything around us. Even communicating with other humans could be considered as

noise

, but there is a blatant boundary on it, which could be harmful or at

okay

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an okay

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level for us.

Thus

, from these, problems are

starting

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arise and becoming

a

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noise

pollution. It can be a

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problem

proble

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problem

because

this

could disturb people's peace or mental health, especially if they heard it constantly

everyday

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like people who work in

factory

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a factory

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without

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an earplug

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earplug

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.

Furthermore

, with the development of audio technology today, we can bring

music

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the music

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anywhere by using

earphone

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earphones

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and

phone

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phones

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. But the problem comes if the

earphone

user put the sound level

into

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maximum

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the maximum

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or

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uses

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it religiously every day. There is

proven

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example of

this

case

,

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when people

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earphone

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too much until it becomes unhealthy

,

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because at that point it is

also

damaging their eardrum and making them almost into

deaf

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the deaf

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state.

Accordingly

, we could reduce

this

problem by following the hearing maximum sound

level's

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level

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standard and not using

earphone

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earphones

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every day.

Moreover

, we have to give our

auditory

organ

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a resting time so they can function normally and in a healthier state.

Also

, try to not

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into our ear canal and

pushing

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the wax deeper, it will close the

ear drum

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eardrum

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and make hearing harder to do. To sum up,

noise

pollution is proven to be harmful

for

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auditory

and mental health. So, to reduce the effects we had to

lessening

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the usage of

auditory

device

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devices

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like

earphone

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earphones

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and not

cleaning

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it haphazardly.