In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

It is observed that
crime
theme
literatures
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and TV shows are gaining more readers and
audience
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audiences
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in recent years. The
stories
are always eye-catching and
people
get addicted to them. There are ample reasons to justify the popularity of
crime
novels and TV
crime
dramas.
To begin
with, we, human
being
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beings
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are drawn to the suspense in the
story
. We want to immerse ourselves in the
story
and are desperate to find out the answer along the way.
Secondly
,
crime
stories
give
people
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our
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curiosity
of
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crime
. The Netflix series Nachos gained a lot of fans over the years despite the brutal and unpredictable
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of the main characters simply because the series show the public the life of the cartel.
Moreover
, we hope to learn a thing or two from the plots and hope we do not get ourselves into the same situation in the future. On the one
hand
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crime
theme
stories
are positive because
it
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they
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can educate us about
the
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crime
and even inspire
people
to be a policeman or a detective.
On the other hand
, not all
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crime
stories
are suitable for everyone, especially teenagers. Some of the scenes could be too violent. The production company should give
people
a warning at the beginning of the show.
In addition
,
people
might get
wrong
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messages from the
story
. Parents should monitor what their children are reading or watching and provide them
advice
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accordingly
. In conclusion,
crime
theme novels and TV dramas are becoming popular due to the suspense and
the
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excitement in the
story
. While they are good
stories
to read or watch, not all of them are suitable for teenagers.
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