You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to ask for your assistance in finding accommodation in Newyork city. My name is Venkatesh Ravichandran, and I will be relocating with my wife and two teenage children. I have recently been promoted at work, which means it will be based out of Newyork

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of Iowa. Given the size of our family, We would prefer to buy a small house with two floors and three bedrooms. Most Importantly, we will be bringing up our dog, a garden is an important consideration as well. We would prefer to have a property on the outskirts of Newyork within easy commuting of the city centre.

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, it should be close to the schools that my children will be attending. I hope that you will be able to find

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for us and look forward to hearing your response soon. Yours faithfully, Venkatesh Ravichandran

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

152 words

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