People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about an internet issue that has been affecting our daily routine for one month. We are not sure what is the problem of not proper connection, but as we know the towers of your company are far from our place and might, it could be the trouble of not proper signal in the devices. Because of no internet connection, people are not able to use mobile banking and other online services and even people get disturbed in their work which is based on devices which get delayed
due to
this
issue. I would suggest you visit
this
area and conduct some research on internet connectivity and make it stronger by adding an extra tower or with another solution, so people can do their daily work without trouble. I hope the company will come ahead with a proper solution. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ankit Patel
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task achievement
Include specific examples or evidence of the problems caused by the poor internet connection, to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph discusses only one main idea more clearly. Your first paragraph discusses possible reasons for the issue and the problem's impact, which could be separated for clarity.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and respectful, which is suitable for this type of letter.
task achievement
The letter addresses the prompt effectively by describing the problem, explaining its impact, and suggesting a solution.

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